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Medium shadows; now long and lowTickle me and usher me inTo write poemsAnd order laws to repeal themselvesA warning shot fired overheadArithmetic, yes, wet clothesThe numbers seem to paintScenes from my childhoodThe Land by Vita Sackville-WestWas a square peg in my round holeWhittling it downWas done under our club treeNo words were spoken thenBut nests were madeAs big sister played
First day at school on our first day at school
I've been trying to come up with some lyrics for more Rumours Of Whores songs. I'd been getting nowhere fast, so decided to look back on things I'd abandoned. I try and think in some kind of poetic form to begin with and then attempt to develop that into a lyric. Sometimes I am successful, sometimes I fail.
Some while back, after listening to Jealousy by Pet Shop Boys, I felt inspired to write this:
Jealousy
Takes its toll on me
Drives me from sanity
Round the bend
To lunacy
I wish that I
Could get away
You know any price I'd pay
So I could turn to you and say
I never cared anyway
I felt like a rebel at the time. It's unconventional. The syllables form no rhythm and there are ten lines. I felt quite good about that, but as a song, it's still a failure.
Then this:
In the night you came to meWaving, mournful, from the shoreThe fiery glow of treacheryWas not put out beneath the sea
From sparks in breaking every lockThe filthy devil set him freeWith gnashers 'round each probing cock
I try.
But fail.
Still, we press on, dear reader. I am British, after all, and if nothing else, my upper lip is stiff!
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William Barnes is one of my favourite poets of all time, perhaps my absolute favourite.This, dear reader, is My Orcha’d In Linden Lea:
‘Ithin the woodlands, flow’ry gleaded,By the woak tree’s mossy moot,The sheenen grass-bleades, timber-sheaded,Now do quiver under voot;An’ birds do whissle over head,An’ water’s bubblen in its bed,An’ there vor me the apple treeDo lean down low in Linden Lea.When leaves that leately wer a-springenNow do feade ‘ithin the copse,An’ painted birds do hush their zingenUp upon the timber’s tops;An’ brown-leav’d fruit’s a-turnen red,In cloudless zunsheen, over head,Wi’ fruit vor me, the apple treeDo lean down low in Linden Lea.Let other vo’k meake money vasterIn the air o’ dark-room’d towns,I don’t dread a peevish measter;Though noo man do heed my frowns,I be free to goo abrode,Or teake agean my hwomeward roadTo where, vor me, the apple treeDo lean down low in Linden Lea.
It's so beautiful, so evocative. When reading it, I can feel the sun beating down on my face, the rustle of the green leaves in the canopy and the twittering birds overhead. I feel like I'm in heaven.
Though I've never spoken the Wessex/Dorset dialect, I did, at one time, speak with a Dorset accent. Hearing or reading such things as My Orcha’d In Linden Lea reminds me, not specifically of another place, but of happy times, carefree and without responsibility. Again, heaven.
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